LinkDoodles's Reviews

[The Gravedigger (T-shirt submission)]

Honestly this is the type of piece that makes me wish I had spent more time working on my design, because this is excellent all around. The color palette is great, your idea is super clever and uses a lot of arty imagery, and the final product has a lot of character and life to it. Maybe this is a personal nitpick, but I'd like to see what it might look like with the outer lines a tad bolder, or at the very least an even width for all parts of the image— it can be a little thin in some areas, especially looking at the preview. However, I still think this is an excellent design, and I totally would get this is if is a contest winner. Very well done, I wish you the best of luck!

EvanScale responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback. Glad you like it.

Its true i thought the same about the outline (mainly the even width around it). Maybe i could have done a more thorough job there.

[The Sketch Is Always Better Than The Lineart]

Such a simple design, but I have to say I love it! It's very relatable too, and I like how you laid everything out, including the art supplies. The blue sketch line is also a great addition— I did the same on my entry as well! My only complaint is really a typography nitpick— did you use Papyrus for the word "Sketch"? A lot of designers will avoid using that font, since it's pretty overused and unprofessional. While I don't think it's a dealbreaker for most people (I'm just a dork when it comes to typefaces) I'd suggest maybe looking around for other handwritten or sketchy fonts if you ever do a design like this again. I don't know newgrounds' rules on suggesting offsite links, but if you look up "dafont" you should find a site with free fonts you can use in future designs. Like I said, though, this really is a nitpick, and I still think I'd get this shirt if it was for sale. Good job, hope this helped for the future!

Zerikix responds:

Oh my god you made me so happy! I NEVER GOT A COMMENT BEFORE LOL! I'll keep the font thing in mind tho! I just thought it looked sketchy so it was a good idea! ^-^ If i don't win tho , I can make it for sale on my own :p I'd love to link you if you would be interested IF I DID DO IT but really JUST THANK YOU SO MUCH! you made me sooooo happy I never got a comment or even i 5 stars <3 I LOVE YOU

[Let's beat the devil out of it!]

This is such a cool design! I love how you characterized Bob Ross, and everything is so crisp and energetic. The only real complaint I have is the lettering— when the text goes through different lineart, coloring, and the negative space of the shirt color, it can be a bit hard to read. I'd suggest either adding a white back (or other bright color) to the text or just keeping it as the shirt color, testing a few options to see what works best. Either way, that's a small complaint to an otherwise really cool design, and I'd probably get this if it was on sale. Good job!

AgataCzerw responds:

Thank you, It would be awesome if it was noticed by Jazza, I will be happy to see his reaction to Buff Ross :D. In case of the text you are 100% right, I should have used one solid color for the greater readability, it's a good advice :)
I also saw you tshirt design and it's so awesome :D I would wear that, I dig space themes and the quote from your shirt is lovely :D Anyway, good luck to us both ;)